domingo, 7 de noviembre de 2010

Temporary insanity

You owe me!
    I owe you nothing!
You stole my love!
    You gave it to me!
What about my tears?
    I shed hundreds too!
My smiles? My laughters?
    I created each one of them!
Really? And my orgasms?
    Well, i did steal those...
My self-esteem?
    I said you were pretty, but you wouldn't listen...
My will to live?
   You lost that on your own....

6 comentarios:

  1. All truth and nothing but the truth, I'll say...

    This reminds me heavily of "Great Expectations". Have you read it? I love it and it's no secret.

    I can easily imagine Estella giving those answers to all of the unanswerable questions you post.

    Ps: it's spelled "pretty". :)

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  2. I never read that book, you have got to lend it to me :)

    PS: I HAD spelled it correctly, but the spell checker changed it and I believed it -.- (damn technology)

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  3. wow.. once again you leave me speechless..
    I really like it!
    I can't go as far as B and say it's true (how would I know?) all I can say it's that I BELIEVE it's pretty truthfull

    (I have to disagree on the orgasms, wouldn't it be the same as in the smiles and the laughter?)

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  4. Remy: You CAN create them, or you can steal them, it's hard to explain...on my mind/world makes sense :)

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  5. I get it now...
    But it's a nice "steal". You make it sound like it's a bad thing, when actually it's...GREAT. It's OMGgreat

    And yes, of course if I had known what u were talking about i would have defended your reputation. I mean, come on.. it's impossible not to

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  6. I gues I don't have much right to argue with you in that area, I just feel that rhe orgasms are created by the other persone, not stolen (I know you don't mean it in a bad way) like smiles.. that's just my opinion ;P

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